[IRP] Nature of Charter - Conference Call
M I Franklin
cos02mf
Thu Nov 25 11:48:37 EET 2010
Dear IRP'ers
My apologies as well for missing the meeting; extenuating circumstances.
To respond to comments so far about the purpose and shape of the Charter;
as a single or set of documents; I agree with Dixie's analysis and others'
points so far; there are several aims and objectives which makes it an
ambitious undertaking; something in itself that people need to persuaded
about!
As to writing/revision issues in light of the 2-3 distinct sorts of
documents we're working with:
My main concern right now is regarding the manifesto/shorter document;
which serves as the primary - 'taster' - document. My question is about how
to distinguish the way this part is being written from the UDHR (as well as
the APC/Brazilian Charters) in terms of the way the clauses/section
headings make clear the way this initiative is looking to develop specific
applications of UDHR clauses to specific areas of the internet.
I mention this as it was the key focus for audience comments at a talk I
recently gave about the Charter process; questions being about how the
section headings distinguished themselves from the general UDHR ones; if
they do, how so, and then how the IRP Charter is *not* reinventing the
wheel.
In short, how can we make clear in a glance in the shorter document the
core aims of the Charter in general ('punchy') and yet also make clear that
it has specific application to the internet? One way is to continue
working on more Internet- specific *headings* (vs. reiterations of the
original UDHR ones) as one way to respond to these recurring 'why bother?'
questions.
best
MF
--On Wednesday, November 24, 2010 12:36 -0500 "Bodle, Robert"
<Robert_Bodle at mail.msj.edu> wrote:
> Hello everyone,
>
> I just missed the meeting ? I was really excited to touch base with
> everyone, but instead I will add some comments below:
>
> I tend to agree with Dixie (and others perhaps) that the aims of the
> Charter should be separated out:
>
> 1) "the Charter" A Manifesto for advocacy (with punchiness ?
> precise, concise, with strong language) 2) a document outlining roles and
> responsibilities
> 3) an explanatory document and reference tool
>
> Yet, I think the reference tool should be elaborate and ambitious ?
> that it should be a digital library, resource center, and commons.
> Perhaps it can be called something like "Human Rights on the Internet:
> Digital Library | Resource Center | Commons (I am drawing inspiration
> here from: http://internetresearchethics.org/ supported by the Center for
> Information Policy Research at the School of Information Studies,
> UW-Milwaukee). This would be a repository for all who want to access
> sources of the provisions in the charter as a resource tool.
>
> This would take $$ which means we would need grant funding opportunities,
> perhaps hosting institutions, PhD candidates to run, etc. I'd love to
> work with someone on this. Maybe it could be a phased project that builds
> steam after the explanatory document is established.
>
> Cheers,
> Robert
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> [irp-bounces at lists.internetrightsandprinciples.org] On Behalf Of Dixie
> Hawtin [Dixie at global-partners.co.uk] Sent: Monday, November 22, 2010 9:06
> AM
> To: irp at lists.internetrightsandprinciples.org
> Subject: [IRP] Nature of Charter - Conference Call
>
> Hi all,
>
> Thanks for the comments which have come in so far about the nature of the
> Charter and what exactly we are trying to do. Anriette - I fully agree
> that the Roles and Responsibilities document is very important and should
> be a priority over the next year. I also think an explanatory document
> citing sources will be incredibly useful. If anyone has any thoughts at
> all, please do send them through to the list.
>
> We will be having a conference call this Wednesday at 15:00 GMT, the
> details of the call are below. Anyone who is free and who is interested
> in the Charter please do join, we have an opportunity now to define
> exactly what it is we are doing and the resulting document and process
> should really benefit from this... which in turn will help us to promote
> human rights in the internet governance arenas!
>
> All the best,
> Dixie
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> Date: Thu, 18 Nov 2010 17:22:40 +0000
> From: Dixie Hawtin <Dixie at global-partners.co.uk>
> To: "irp at lists.internetrightsandprinciples.org"
> <irp at lists.internetrightsandprinciples.org>
> Subject: [IRP] My opinion
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> Hi all,
>
>
>
> There haven't been any replies yet about the "objectives and nature of
> the Charter", so I thought that if I state my own opinions it may provoke
> someone to disagree (or even agree!) with me.
>
>
>
> The more I look at the Charter the more I feel like we are trying to
> achieve two quite different things in the same document - on the one hand
> we are writing an advocacy document and trying to promote a particular
> and very progressive interpretation of human rights. On the other hand we
> are trying to write a reference document which is as comprehensive as
> possible and it doesn't matter that we are repetitive, nuanced,
> meandering etc. I think that both of these aims are very important and
> can be achieved through the Charter process, but I think they should be
> separated out so that the documents are more coherent and so much
> stronger.
>
>
>
> I feel that the Charter should be structured in a slightly different way.
> I think that when we talk about "the Charter" we should be referring to
> just the first section (i.e. rights and principles) and that this should
> be strong and definite and read like a manifesto. Then, I think two/three
> other documents are needed to back it up (which form a "family" of
> documents):
>
>
>
> 1. What is currently section two, a document outlining the roles and
> responsibilities of all actors in relation to the Charter right/principles
>
> 2. An explanatory document which lists all the sources of the provisions
> in the Charter and states the arguments behind what we have chosen to
> include (here you would find ALL sources, e.g. international, regional,
> non-human rights documents such as WTO or WIPO docs, national document
> e.g. Brazilian principles, documents from other groups e.g. EFF
> principles etc). This would be very useful as a reference tool.
>
> 3. A user friendly version, although I would hope that the Charter could
> be made simple and clear enough that a user-friendly document wouldn't be
> necessary.
>
>
> With "The Charter" in my opinion we are operating within the framework of
> existing human rights, and everything we state must be drawn back to an
> existing human right, but we can be as progressive as we like within
> those boundaries. The authority for our arguments comes from outside
> documents where they back up our arguments, but to a greater extent comes
> from the large amount of knowledge we contain within the Coalition on the
> internet and human rights, together with our extensive consultation
> process.
>
>
>
> However, given that "The Charter" should be (in my opinion) predominately
> an advocacy document, I think we need to be precise, concise and use
> strong language. I have examples, but I don't want to give everyone to
> much to read! Here are just a couple:
>
> -I think some of our provisions are quite weak and should be removed
> (although very few of them are in this category, one example is this:
> "the Internet [must be use] for the protection of the environment" (nb, I
> am not proposing that we remove mention of ewaste)
>
> -I think some of our provisions are repetitive and only one is necessary,
> for example the article on right to associations contains both of these
> sentences where I feel only one is needed
>
> * Everyone has the right to form, join, meet or visit the website
> or network of an assembly, group or association for any reason, including
> political and social.
>
> * Everyone has the freedom to establish or join online
> communities. -I believe we should use powerful language e.g. not
> "Cultural and linguistic diversity on the Internet shall be encouraged in
> the form of text, images and sound" as it is at present, but, "Cultural
> and linguistic diversity on the Internet must be realized".
>
> I look forward to hearing people's thoughts on this.
> All the best,
> Dixie
> ___________________________________________________________
> Dixie Hawtin
> Researcher Global Partners and Associates
> 338 City Road, London, EC1V 2PY, UK
> Office: + 44 207 239 8251 Mobile: +44 7769 181 556
> dixie at global-partners.co.uk<mailto:lisa at global-partners.co.uk>
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> From: Anriette Esterhuysen <anriette at apc.org>
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> Subject: Re: [IRP] My opinion
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> Dear Dixie
>
> I agree with you.. very hard to have a focused document if it is trying
> to achieve multiple, and different goals.
>
> In splitting it into a family of documents I would like to see a far
> more prominent place for what, from my perspective, is an incredibly
> useful piece of work.. the spreadsheet with rights an interpretations
> from an internet perspective which Meryem developed.
>
> Anriette
>
>
> On 18/11/10 19:22, Dixie Hawtin wrote:
>>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> There haven't been any replies yet about the "objectives and nature of
>> the Charter", so I thought that if I state my own opinions it may
>> provoke someone to disagree (or even agree!) with me.
>>
>> The more I look at the Charter the more I feel like we are trying to
>> achieve two quite different things in the same document -- on the one
>> hand we are writing an advocacy document and trying to promote a
>> particular and very progressive interpretation of human rights. On the
>> other hand we are trying to write a reference document which is as
>> comprehensive as possible and it doesn't matter that we are
>> repetitive, nuanced, meandering etc. I think that both of these aims
>> are very important and can be achieved through the Charter process,
>> but I think they should be separated out so that the documents are
>> more coherent and so much stronger.
>>
>> I feel that the Charter should be structured in a slightly different
>> way. I think that when we talk about "the Charter" we should be
>> referring to just the first section (i.e. rights and principles) and
>> that this should be strong and definite and read like a manifesto.
>> Then, I think two/three other documents are needed to back it up
>> (which form a "family" of documents):
>>
>> 1. What is currently section two, a document outlining the roles and
>> responsibilities of all actors in relation to the Charter
>> right/principles
>>
>> 2. An explanatory document which lists all the sources of the
>> provisions in the Charter and states the arguments behind what we have
>> chosen to include (here you would find ALL sources, e.g.
>> international, regional, non-human rights documents such as WTO or
>> WIPO docs, national document e.g. Brazilian principles, documents from
>> other groups e.g. EFF principles etc). This would be very useful as a
>> reference tool.
>>
>> 3. A user friendly version, although I would hope that the Charter
>> could be made simple and clear enough that a user-friendly document
>> wouldn't be necessary.
>>
>> With "The Charter" in my opinion we are operating within the framework
>> of existing human rights, and everything we state must be drawn back
>> to an existing human right, but we can be as progressive as we like
>> within those boundaries. The authority for our arguments comes from
>> outside documents where they back up our arguments, but to a greater
>> extent comes from the large amount of knowledge we contain within the
>> Coalition on the internet and human rights, together with our
>> extensive consultation process.
>>
>> However, given that "The Charter" should be (in my opinion)
>> predominately an advocacy document, I think we need to be precise,
>> concise and use strong language. I have examples, but I don't want to
>> give everyone to much to read! Here are just a couple:
>>
>> -I think some of our provisions are quite weak and should be removed
>> (although very few of them are in this category, one example is this:
>> "the Internet [must be use] for the protection of the environment"
>> (nb, I am not proposing that we remove mention of ewaste)
>>
>> -I think some of our provisions are repetitive and only one is
>> necessary, for example the article on right to associations contains
>> both of these sentences where I feel only one is needed
>>
>> ? Everyone has the right to form, join, meet or visit the website or
>> network of an assembly, group or association for any reason, including
>> political and social.
>>
>> ? Everyone has the freedom to establish or join online communities.
>>
>> -I believe we should use powerful language e.g. not "Cultural and
>> linguistic diversity on the Internet shall be encouraged in the form
>> of text, images and sound" as it is at present, but, "Cultural and
>> linguistic diversity on the Internet must be realized".
>>
>> I look forward to hearing people's thoughts on this.
>>
>> All the best,
>>
>> Dixie
>>
>> ___________________________________________________________
>>
>> *Dixie Hawtin*
>>
>> *Researcher **Global Partners and Associates***
>>
>> 338 City Road, London, EC1V 2PY, UK
>>
>> Office: + 44 207 239 8251 Mobile: +44 7769 181 556
>>
>> *dixie at global-partners.co.uk <mailto:lisa at global-partners.co.uk>**
>> **www.global-partners.co.uk <http://www.global-partners.co.uk/> *
>>
>>
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